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Alex Strøm

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Hi Khizar! I like this logo. I think you've improved since the first logo i saw by you, which is awesome! I like that it can work in both grayscale, as negative/positive and in color! :) I would say though, that it feels a bit unbalanced. Maybe making the font larger and making a little space between the mark and typeface would also improve it! Overall good job, nice to see you working hard :)
1 day ago by Alex Strøm
Hi Eugene. This design is really nice! The lines reminds me of soundbars, I don't know if that was intentional, but i like it. I also really like the gradient. If I were to change anything, I would round the corners of the font, so they match the hot air balloon. It would also make the typeface look more custom. Really good job! Keep up the good work!
1 week ago by Alex Strøm
Hi! Awesome to hear that you're getting into designing. I get the concept, but there's a few things you could change to make it even better. It doesn't feel like it's for kids (tbh it's giving me slightly pedophilia vibes - i think it's the tag line combined with the dark colors), so changing the colors to brighter, 'happy' colors could work. You could even make the letters in "TOY WORLD" all different colors, and keep the tagline dark. Because of the curved effect on the "TOY WORLD", I would make the letters all caps to create a nice even line (the Y breaks the line). Then I would remove the box around "let's play kids" and move that text up, closer to the title. Lastly, when displaying the logo, I would disply it on a lighter background (preferably white), since the letters are dark. I am looking forward to seeing what you'll create in the future. Good luck on your graphic design journey.
1 week ago by Alex Strøm
Hi! Thank you for feedback on my design. I'm glad to hear that you're getting into graphic design. I like the concept. I think it would work a little better if the record was a circle, not an oval. I also like the combination of a sans-serif font with a script font. If I were to change anything about the typography, I would maybe choose a font that looks hand-lettered and curve that a little to make it look more custom. I would also make the text a little bigger, so there's more focus on the company's name. Looking forward to seeing what you'll do in the future. Keep designing ;)
1 week ago by Alex Strøm
This looks absolutely perfect! The texture is really nice (Would love to know what brushes you used), and the idea of the steak in the shape of Texas is amazing. Would love to see variations such as a more horizontal look and how it will look on SoMe (In a circle for example). Really good job, Chollene!
1 week ago by Alex Strøm
Cute logo. If I were to improve it, I'd round the edges on the panda a little to match the font. Also, consider making the word "Global" slightly bolder, so it doesn't disappear, when you shrink the logo down to a few cm. Really good job!
1 week ago by Alex Strøm
This is a nice dynamic logo :) I think the outline of the circle could be improved by making it a little bit bolder, so they are noticeable even when the logo is very small. Maybe even using a calligraphy brush that'd making them look hand drawn. Super nice logo overall.
1 week ago by Alex Strøm
I really love this lettermark :) It looks like a wave and feels very dynamic. I think it can also work as just negative or positive, but I would like to see how that'd turn out. Really good job!
1 week ago by Alex Strøm
I like the concept of the interlacing of the ice cream, however, it comes off a bit messy. I think it would help a little bit if the ice-cream scoops were completely round. In terms of color I think the colors can work, but maybe de-saturate them a little and make them lighter as well. I think the cone would be more appealing if it was white with black markings (instead of black with green marking). I hope you continue working on this design, and I would love to see it after a few revisions
1 week ago by Alex Strøm
I like the minimalism of the logo, it makes it feel fashionable. However, I feel like the K might get lost. For me it reads more like a graphic element than a letter. Maybe if you made it black, like the rest of the letters it'd read more as a letter? Really good job.
1 week ago by Alex Strøm
I really like that the mark as well as the type is multi-colored and matched. Unfortunately with the orange it reminds me a lot of the Sound Cloud logo. Since both company names start with the word Sound and both logos are orange, it'd be easy to mix them up. I think a different color might be better, since it will separate the company from Sound Cloud, which is the more well-known out of the two. Really good job with the flow of the logo. I also like the pattern in the back of the presentation.
1 week ago by Alex Strøm
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National Park Logo (Daily Logo Challenge - Day 20)

1 day ago by Alex Strøm
Hi everyone!

So I recently finished the 50 days daily logo challenge, and while I could see myself improving from the beginning to the end, I would like feedback on a few select logos from the challenge. Thank you for anything you might have to say.
Love these colors! The only thing is that the text seems a bit off-center or the curve the text is on is different than the other circles
15 hours ago by August van de Ven

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Abstract Peacock Logo Design

1 week ago by Alex Strøm
Hi everybody!
Would love some feedback for this logomark :) Any tips are greatly appreciated.

Logo Design for Food Truck (Let's Ketchup Sometime)

1 week ago by Alex Strøm
I did this lettering logo design for The Daily Logo Challenge, and since I am still inexperienced with lettering and logotypes, I'd like some feedback.

The logo design is a for a food truck called "Let's Ketchup Sometime". Thank you.
I love this!
1 week ago by Alisha
Im also new to designing but I love your logo, its original :) Also... what do you think about mine? Destroy me :D
1 week ago by jiri_pudich

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