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Good placement and heirarchy,
9 months ago by Kevin
Great work. Any tips for someone thinking of taking up UX/UI? Seem like you could give some. -Kevin
1 year ago by Kevin
Appreciate it, it was a first time trying this. Learned a lot so far
1 year ago by Kevin
Excellent form and color choice. I would just polish up the moon a bit unless you are going for a 'hand made' aesthetic, in which case, it succeeds. Mioght be cool to either see the moon cleaner or the letters a but more 'hand crafted' as well. I wish we could upload animations onto this site, this would be a great collab
1 year ago by Kevin
Excellent concept. See if there isn't a way to make the letter 'P' and 'V' the actual weights as opposed to negative positive forms containing negative space. Look good, though, good work.
1 year ago by Kevin
in what sense so I can improve it?
1 year ago by Kevin
Good work. I'm wondering how it would look without the circle and with the cow/bull as the form of the logo itself.
1 year ago by Kevin
Try adjusting the spacing between the header 'business plan of' and 'paraluman Studios'. Also, 'The Business plan of' should be one line or if you want to keep 'of' separate, I'd center it so its hovering nice and balanced over the studio name. Lastly, I'd change the font to a sans serif typeface and make the brown rectangle extend father outward so that the text is contained within it.
1 year ago by Kevin
Great use of color and layout. Might be cool to see how different typefaces look, perhaps somethint sans serif and modern. Looks great, though! Talented!
1 year ago by Kevin
Love the hierarchy and color choices. Honestly thought this was an ad on the website. How did you isolate the photo so cleanly?
1 year ago by Kevin
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CLAIR DE LUNE

9 months ago by Kevin
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Wow I love the design! It captivated me right away good job!
9 months ago by Autumn - Reply
Beautiful design! I particularly like the scrolls framing the text and the way the bold lines bring the moon to the foreground
9 months ago by Amber - Reply

Uservice

1 year ago by Kevin
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very nice, visually represents the company name perfectly and is easy to read
1 year ago by Anaya Jobson - Reply

DTP SHIPPING SOLUTIONS

1 year ago by Kevin
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nice, simple yet proffesional :)
1 year ago by Anaya Jobson - Reply

Uservice

1 year ago by Kevin
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I think that the concept of the icon is great (I like the right one in the 2nd row the most, after that the middle one in the 3rd.) but to me it looks like you either didnt put much effort in the designing process or didnt know how to propperly do it, sorry if it sounds hard but it seems (from the given picture) pretty unprofessional, - the random dots and steps in the curve of the "U", the not even lining of the "U". I like the thought of it though! Give it more time :)
1 year ago by Ian - Reply
Appreciate it, it was a first time trying this. Learned a lot so far
1 year ago by Kevin - Reply
Contrast is not properly used
1 year ago by JOSHUA - Reply
in what sense so I can improve it?
1 year ago by Kevin - Reply

HALO

1 year ago by Kevin
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I really like the logo that you made here! the colours feel luxorius and high-end. One thing I would point out though is that the type on the shampoo and conditioner looks kinda squished and trapped - maybe give it more space and adjust the vertical lines [In the very detail the thing I realized is that the logo gets cut by the vertical lines at different spots] Other than that this is a good design job, especially the logo!
1 year ago by Ian - Reply
Pretty Good
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