Raphael Etim

Nice layout, nice choice of colours.

Very new nice, well done!

Nice work!

Nice job though I would have liked to see the brief...

This is veeerryy nice!

I particularly like ones on the left and right respectively, discard the middle one. However, the tagline on the one on the right i.e. with the white background, should be placed a bit more closer to the 'DTP' initials. And remove the star in the letter 'D' of the logo on the left. Over all, good job!

I see what you did here. I like the effect you created, the shoe is neither behind the letters s, a and I, nor Infront of them. You maintained their outline. Good creativity, very nice, Bilal.

The colour pallet used should adhere to the sandwiches, that is, the background should have been green as in the lettuce, yellow text because of the cheese, etc...As ide that good job!

The mascot appears surprised, what comes to mind when you think of a cake? It's taste, right? So, you should have given the mascot a smile to show excitement...

A silhouette of the track of a tractor is a good way to incorporate that. Since it's a word mark kind of logo, use the tracks of a tractor to design the name. The brief said to use white as their color but you used green, so this doesn't adhere to their description. And you didn't show how it connects to women since they are the target audience. The heart shape used doesn't really convey the client's target audience.

Thanks for the feedback. This is just the back of the business card, have you seen the front? If so, what's your view?

Your logo is not precise, I can't tell what it is.

I like your use of pink as background that contrasts with the purple fonts.

Nice work, I would have used a different font say sans serif or Calibri. Other than fonts, you did a good job!