Priyanka Salelkar

Such a cute and memorable mascot! The only thing is that I first read the logo as 'Foneix', but then thought maybe its an 'H', and finally got that its 'Phoneix'. So, however good the design idea be, if its harming the legibility, I think it should be altered or dropped. Also, all the letters don't have the same direction, so that can be improved.

Love the brand mark - it is a line drawing giving a 3D effect, and is so uniquely memorable to identify the company with! But the business card should include details like phone number, email, address etc. as its main purpose is for people to know the contact details.

Thank you! :)

Great! Very clean and functional but you can the design more modern and interesting.

Great logo! The links are too widely spaced. Also, the maps are a heavy contrast, so if you can show the directions by line drawing, it would gel with the design. Instead of showing the links, only the social media logos can do the job of communicating that you can find us on these platforms. The back of the card can display only the directions and the social media, contact number and email can go with the logo. Sorry for bombarding with so many suggestions, but hope it helps!

Beautiful! I feel the curvy lines on the top are unnecessary and confuse the design with too many elements. Gobeil and Illustrator can be moved to the left, so that there is no space gap between the flower and name. You can try different placements and see if all the elements lockup and fit together as one design piece. Great otherwise :)

Thank you!

Appreciate your feedback :)

Very fun! Great job on creating a personality through the logo, looks like Michelle is a children's book illustrator :)

Very clean and modern! Curious to know what the brief was about

Great! But the font size is too small at some places and there's too much empty space on the sides, which doesn't blend in with the design.

Hey thank you!

Kudos to you for extending the brief so creatively and bringing out such an excellent design piece! I was so confused and disappointed after receiving a similar brief mentioning only the name of the business - "Qal", but your design gives me so much hope and inspiration! :)

Wow this so good! Perfectly fits the brief 😍

Wow looks so premium! Love the free flowing mark on the backside :)

Has a heavenly feel, but does not look very premium. Maybe changing the typeface or simplifying the illustrated lines at the edges will help?

Looks very high-end, but misses the heavenly look because of the colour palette.

I'm not a UI/UX designer but as a consumer, I can say that this looks great! I especially like the inspiration tabs with reflections and the magazine beside Never miss a thing catches my attention. Great job :)