Brendan

Simple is always great. Try using a more stylized font for the logo. Maybe a san serif with rounded features for a modern look. For the tag, try sentence case or title case. Small caps can come across as formal.

ok

it's really good but i think it lacks colour i think you sould add more colour on this one maybe some maybe background designs would work

Really good but too colorful on one side and plain on the other.

oh my godd this work is really good i hope to do something like this in the future..... and i think that editing could have been more clean