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It gives a bit of a childish look to the logo can you please let me know what the Sun represents in the logo hope you find my feedback helpful :)
1 week ago by Yash
I think the brief they have just finished a Kickstarter campaign for their Bluetooth-enabled mattress and that's not actually the important point is, the briefing key point is sleepy (som-num Latin meaning), and mattress that's it.
1 week ago by Yash
I think there's nothing use of moon there if you add sleepy face in your logo it looks like it is something on character head hope you find the feedback constructive :)
1 week ago by Yash
I appreciated how well you understand the brief but the "S" gives me a kind of dark and black its looking like it giving me a kind of Goblin feel although the feel is not coming out properly hope some mockups and making some tweaks in typeface really help here :)
1 week ago by Yash
The besttttt... one
1 week ago by Yash
Hii Ally, maybe I think the picture is not coveying the real goal of a brand? but about the logo, it is clean, minimal, simple, and aesthetic too.
1 week ago by Yash
Thanks :)
1 week ago by Yash
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1 week ago by Yash
I tried to bring the coziness of the brand and the main essence of the brief which sleepy also written in brief though, it is also mentioned a lot of things about their business but in context, I think the real value should be shown in the logo and recognizable with users easily I made few more versions of it for that please check out on my work Behance
https://www.behance.net/gallery/146669615/SOM-NUM-%28Mattress-brand%29
https://www.behance.net/gallery/146669615/SOM-NUM-%28Mattress-brand%29
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Fantastic job with the briefing, you made something not soo serius as the briefing asked and passed the products they sell in a easy way.
1 week ago by João Pedro Costa Lima - Reply
Thanks :)
1 week ago by Yash - Reply