Sign in

Sign Up

By signing up, you agree to the Terms and conditions and the Privacy policy

Sign In

Yash

Posts
1
Likes
1
Liked Posts
19
Given Feedback
7

Feedback

It gives a bit of a childish look to the logo can you please let me know what the Sun represents in the logo hope you find my feedback helpful :)
1 week ago by Yash
I think the brief they have just finished a Kickstarter campaign for their Bluetooth-enabled mattress and that's not actually the important point is, the briefing key point is sleepy (som-num Latin meaning), and mattress that's it.
1 week ago by Yash
I think there's nothing use of moon there if you add sleepy face in your logo it looks like it is something on character head hope you find the feedback constructive :)
1 week ago by Yash
I appreciated how well you understand the brief but the "S" gives me a kind of dark and black its looking like it giving me a kind of Goblin feel although the feel is not coming out properly hope some mockups and making some tweaks in typeface really help here :)
1 week ago by Yash
The besttttt... one
1 week ago by Yash
Hii Ally, maybe I think the picture is not coveying the real goal of a brand? but about the logo, it is clean, minimal, simple, and aesthetic too.
1 week ago by Yash
Thanks :)
1 week ago by Yash
View more

Posts

som-num (𝘴𝘭𝘦𝘦𝘱𝘺)

1 week ago by Yash
I tried to bring the coziness of the brand and the main essence of the brief which sleepy also written in brief though, it is also mentioned a lot of things about their business but in context, I think the real value should be shown in the logo and recognizable with users easily I made few more versions of it for that please check out on my work Behance
https://www.behance.net/gallery/146669615/SOM-NUM-%28Mattress-brand%29
comment2

Sign in or create an account to comment on this post

Sign in Create an account
Fantastic job with the briefing, you made something not soo serius as the briefing asked and passed the products they sell in a easy way.
1 week ago by João Pedro Costa Lima - Reply
Thanks :)
1 week ago by Yash - Reply