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Dafune Azusagawa

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nice selection of colors.
1 year ago by Dafune Azusagawa
Take note of the wrong spelling, It should be "energy." There's not much emphasis on the focal point, make bg must not have the same color bg as the focal point. "Clean energy..." line must be made smaller, following the rule of hierarchy.
1 year ago by Dafune Azusagawa
Rainbow is not appropriate, but I do like the logo! Maybe the text can be made smaller and nudge it slightly more downwards. :))
1 year ago by Dafune Azusagawa
The text "RENT NOW" should be pure white. Green is inappropriate for car rentals, I recommend trying shades of blue or red. Make sure text is still legible.
1 year ago by Dafune Azusagawa
Yes, it is simple- I see that it can be improved, I think you should centerize the focal point between the "Pheonix Bakery" and "The Taste of Home-Baked Goodness". The text "Pheonix Bakery" should be made slightly smaller and the focal point larger to add more emphasis. Overall, it's good, all elements are cohesive with each other.
1 year ago by Dafune Azusagawa
Simple and bold, i like it!
1 year ago by Dafune Azusagawa
It is too basic and there is more room for improvement.
1 year ago by Dafune Azusagawa
Nice design, although I would make few alterations. It's good that you chose green as it is related to health, but maybe make green lighter? :)) Input of data is too far from each other. Email, password, and re-enter password must be centerized in the page. For 3rd and 4th page, make "sigh up" and "welcome back" larger. :))
1 year ago by Dafune Azusagawa
It does look like a diamond, however, I think it can be improved. Add highlights and depth.
1 year ago by Dafune Azusagawa
Black text does not work with a dark blue background; legibility must be considered in texts. It's good that you have a focal point in your design, however, I think that it can be emphasized and designed better.
1 year ago by Dafune Azusagawa
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