Jacob Hall

I feel like the face doesn’t really fit with the rest of the style of the logo.

I think you could make the font bigger. That’s what you want people to notice the most on a business card.

Maybe having the font not so close to the edge might make look better. And some more weight and style in the fonts.

I feel like this done by a child to be honest. You have allot of negative space you can use to add some type that describes the business. Also I think if you can make some better illustrations that don’t look flat might be really helpful. You might be better off using an image instead of the illustration.

This looks really good. My only suggestion if any, would be to play with a font that might fit better with the Logo. I know there’s tons out there. But just an idea.

Looks good. I wonder if you played with different font weights, I think it’ll be fun to see more of that. Also I think your title could be a little bigger, not by much, just a little. And maybe have your text off of the right match the height of the coupon box or higher. That would be my feedback.

Thanks.

Thank you for your feedback.

I wonder what it would look like if the font on the bottom match more with the actual style of the logo. That’s my thought on it.

I like this better than your recent design of this logo.

I think the Logo should be a little bigger and the name a little smaller. Just an Idea.

I feel like the diamond might be hard for some people to see it and recognize it, but at the same time I love it.

I think adding some more variety of weight, style and size of text on your longest text box would be a fun to see.

I like your design. My only suggestion is that the way the "C" and the "N" are touching other letters making a tangent. Plus maybe making the tents you have on your "T" the same size. Also maybe making the rest of the letters more even and matching could be good too.

I can see that you made part of the "N" a hand on the "S" shape clock. I think if it looks more centered on a real clock that might make it nicer.

On suggestion. I think this logo would look good if you chose a different font. Maybe one that fits with the rest of the logo.

Maybe make the button bigger and the text as well. Also adding a transparency background for the text might help it pop more. otherwise it looks good.

I think having at least one more color would be good. Possibly another neutral color. I like you used the tent to make the "T".

I think if you increase the size of the day and name of the place a little bigger would be the only suggestion I can think of.

Looks good. If you feel like it needs it, I think the phone number could be a little bit bigger or stand out a little more.

Good work. I think including more colors would make your shapes pop out more.