Molly
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So I had to read your description to understand what was going on with the green olive and the lettering. That green olive also doesn't look like an olive but more like a crescent moon with a line through it. Also think if this were to be scaled it would get lost since it's already so small. I'm trying to see where the "y" is inside the "U" and can't. Also consider the fact it is a diner, diners aren't really known for being classy but more casual.
2 years ago by Molly
I agree with the other person that the cupcake is too square to be an "o". The letter spacing is a bit off and the cupcake is lower than the other letters which makes it feel more out of place. The font is very plain and boring compared to the cupcake as well. I think maybe a serif font instead of san serif as san serif fonts come off as more modern and not as "fun".
2 years ago by Molly