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Jesus_S
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yeah, I wasent to sure about the crosses, but the tokyo has a lot of them, so I just added them. Ill look into the font as well.
4 days ago by Jesus_S
I like it a lot and the font I feel is just right, but the colors are a bit muted, I think it would look great with some more vibrant colors.
3 weeks ago by Jesus_S
Hi, of course ill like to explane, so I based the design on a piece of brewery equipment, its called Stainless Steel Vertical Brewery Tanks, but the brief said it wanted a abstract logo, so I tryed and combind both brewery and abstract. I ahve also made improvements to the logo, after getting some feed back from here, but I dont know have to post a update, but if you would like to see it I can send it to you, via email, or if there is aother way Ill be more then happy
3 weeks ago by Jesus_S
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MerusBatters logo
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Jesus_S • 5 days ago
MerusBatters
I based this off of the tokyo tower, that represent the valus and honor of japan
the idea is supper and the mockup is perfect
2 days ago by Amr Ashraf - Reply
I love the design. I would vote for taking the hairline crosses off and using a font that mimics a Japanese style.
2 days ago by Bobbie Hall - Reply
I think the design portion of the logo is really great, could potentially be even simplified more without the super fine line weights just for overall readability when its scaled down the crosses are hard to see so you might just eliminate them as a whole. Additionally, I think the font choice could be thought out a little bit better!
4 days ago by Rihana Barrera - Reply
yeah, I wasent to sure about the crosses, but the tokyo has a lot of them, so I just added them. Ill look into the font as well.
4 days ago by Jesus_S - Reply
tokyo tower*
4 days ago by Jesus_S - Reply
Brewery Abstract logo update
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Jesus_S • 3 weeks ago
didnt know how to post a updat on my original post so am making another one, here is a updated version of the logo for the brewery, they asked for it to be abstract, and I also based it off of Stainless Steel Vertical Brewery Tanks.
Simple, but somehow very cool looking. The logo is simple, but it seems to have a deep meaning. I like your design.
1 week ago by Dhea Novianti R - Reply
Well since i didn't read what the brief is, I think this logo is unique and simple. Personally i like it, but maybe you can change the yellow line/pole with bottle figure. That will be more abstract if you asked to be abstract.
2 weeks ago by Ashria Rahmayanti - Reply
you mean change the pole, into the form of a bottle?
2 weeks ago by Jesus_S - Reply
yes that's what i mean.:)
1 week ago by Ashria Rahmayanti - Reply
This is lovely,I like the idea of using the brewery tank
2 weeks ago by Faith Adie - Reply
thank you very much
2 weeks ago by Jesus_S - Reply
positioning the logo too narrow, can be reduced to give the design breath, and choose a contrasting font color
2 weeks ago by Abdurrahman Ahsan - Reply
Ok, ill try making the logo more narrow, and what color would you recommend?
2 weeks ago by Jesus_S - Reply
In terms of design, the logo has an interesting concept with simple and symbolic shapes. Here are a few points for improvement:
Balance of Elements: The logo is quite symmetrical, but it can be made more dynamic by adjusting the proportions of elements like the icon and text so it doesn't look too crowded.
Legibility: The text "BREWERY INK" is clear, but if you narrow the logo, ensure the text remains easy to read at smaller sizes. You might consider slightly modifying the font to make it look more modern or playful, depending on the brand's character.
Color: The orange and yellow colors provide a cheerful and bright feel, which fits well with the brewery theme. However, adding contrast (such as a darker background) could make the logo stand out more.
Overall, the design is good and can be enhanced with a few adjustments to make it sharper and more professional. - Chatgpt
1 week ago by Abdurrahman Ahsan - Reply
The logo looks quite eye-catching.
3 weeks ago by Noorie - Reply
abstract mark Brewery logo
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Jesus_S • 3 weeks ago
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I tryed to base it off of a piece of brewery equipment, but am not to sure about it, I would like some feed back pls.
Wow, I really like it. Your concept is really cool. I still don't understand your concept, but it looks really cool. If you want, you can give a deeper explanation.
3 weeks ago by Dhea Novianti R - Reply
Hi, of course ill like to explane, so I based the design on a piece of brewery equipment, its called Stainless Steel Vertical Brewery Tanks, but the brief said it wanted a abstract logo, so I tryed and combind both brewery and abstract. I ahve also made improvements to the logo, after getting some feed back from here, but I dont know have to post a update, but if you would like to see it I can send it to you, via email, or if there is aother way Ill be more then happy
3 weeks ago by Jesus_S - Reply
Very good. You explained it well. Thanks for replying to my comment. I like your concept.
3 weeks ago by Dhea Novianti R - Reply
Hi, I have checked some of your work, and I must say that you are an impressive designer. This is nice but I am not fully getting the brewery picture with this logo
3 weeks ago by Ibukun Folorunsho - Reply
I tryed to base it off of a piece of brewery equipment but the brief sais they wanted it to be obstract, so I tryed to combind both brewery and abstract
3 weeks ago by Jesus_S - Reply
I think the concept is really great. Simple, clean and sleek. I think people might have a hard time identifying what exactly it is at first glance but once words are added for context I think it will look like a unique logo!
3 weeks ago by Rihana Barrera - Reply
I agree, I have improved it, but I dont know how I can upload it so I can get opinions.
3 weeks ago by Jesus_S - Reply