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furniture store poster
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fatima • 1 month ago
I am Marcelene, founder of Berlin Furniture Store. I'm looking for someone that can design something for my furniture store. We will need a poster to advertise our business.
Very professional, I like it.
1 month ago by Dhea Novianti R - Reply

Gift shop logo (amended)
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fatima • 3 months ago
i just amend this logo i'd posted before. please give feedback. tq.
looks good, but seems quite simple.. i couldnt see any uniformity here.. im sure you would improve
3 months ago by anika - Reply
The writing is very funny. You made it with a good concept. The colors also blend together, it doesn't look weird.
3 months ago by Dhea Novianti R - Reply
This is a great with a creative concept! A few refinements in font consistency, spacing, and color contrast will make it even more polished and professional.
3 months ago by Camille F. Saraga - Reply

bakery logo shop (amend)
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fatima • 3 months ago
i just amend this logo i'd posted before. please give feedback. tq.
again... looks quite childish and copied from somewhere...there is no specifc color scheme too...
3 months ago by anika - Reply
I think the logo has too much elements, but the colour combination (pink and green) is beautiful!
3 months ago by Sasa - Reply
this is definitely better than the last one and in spite the compactness, the outline on "Lily's Bakery" makes it stand out even more
3 months ago by Rodney - Reply

Bakery shop logo
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fatima • 3 months ago
A woman named Lily just found a new business. She named her bakery shop, Lily's Bakery. She wants a playful logo and a logo that attract young audiences. (Pls comment tq:))
Very creative with the logo overall, though the images seem to be out of symmetry specifically with the wheat and the utensils, unless that is what you were aiming for.
3 months ago by Rodney - Reply
Yeah i agreed too. I just realised that it seems like out of symmetry:D huhu. Thank you for your constructive comments!
3 months ago by fatima - Reply
The logo is very playful, though there's inconsistencies between the visual elements used. I would either go for everything having equal stroke or having no stroke at all. The chefs hat is the most glaring example of this. The wheat on the right is slightly misaligned from its stem. I love the choice of colours on the font, though!
3 months ago by Kieran - Reply
I see.. okay! Thank you for your constructive comments 🫶🏻 i appreciated it.
3 months ago by fatima - Reply
Wow, very creative. You draw satisfying details. The writing also blends in very well. The cooking utensils are so clear. Excellent.
3 months ago by Dhea Novianti R - Reply
Thanks you! 🫶🏻
3 months ago by fatima - Reply

Gift Shop Logo Design
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fatima • 3 months ago
A man named Pat just found out a new business named Pat's Gift Shop. He need a typography focused logo. (please comment on my work, thank you !)
as i said earlier... looks copied
3 months ago by anika - Reply
This looks good though, especially for the way you designed the word, "GIFT". Though just my suggestion, the words on the side feel a bit bland for a logo and would have been better for "Pat's" and "Shop" to be above and below the gift word respectively. Otherwise it looks pretty good
3 months ago by Rodney - Reply
Creative design. I like how you made the “GIFT” logo well. The color given also blends well.
3 months ago by Dhea Novianti R - Reply