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Gift shop logo (amended)
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fatima • 6 days ago
i just amend this logo i'd posted before. please give feedback. tq.
The writing is very funny. You made it with a good concept. The colors also blend together, it doesn't look weird.
5 days ago by Dhea Novianti R - Reply
This is a great with a creative concept! A few refinements in font consistency, spacing, and color contrast will make it even more polished and professional.
6 days ago by Camille F. Saraga - Reply

bakery logo shop (amend)
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fatima • 6 days ago
i just amend this logo i'd posted before. please give feedback. tq.

Bakery shop logo
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fatima • 1 week ago
A woman named Lily just found a new business. She named her bakery shop, Lily's Bakery. She wants a playful logo and a logo that attract young audiences. (Pls comment tq:))
Very creative with the logo overall, though the images seem to be out of symmetry specifically with the wheat and the utensils, unless that is what you were aiming for.
1 week ago by Rodney - Reply
Yeah i agreed too. I just realised that it seems like out of symmetry:D huhu. Thank you for your constructive comments!
1 week ago by fatima - Reply
The logo is very playful, though there's inconsistencies between the visual elements used. I would either go for everything having equal stroke or having no stroke at all. The chefs hat is the most glaring example of this. The wheat on the right is slightly misaligned from its stem. I love the choice of colours on the font, though!
1 week ago by Kieran - Reply
I see.. okay! Thank you for your constructive comments 🫶🏻 i appreciated it.
1 week ago by fatima - Reply
Wow, very creative. You draw satisfying details. The writing also blends in very well. The cooking utensils are so clear. Excellent.
1 week ago by Dhea Novianti R - Reply
Thanks you! 🫶🏻
1 week ago by fatima - Reply

Gift Shop Logo Design
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fatima • 2 weeks ago
A man named Pat just found out a new business named Pat's Gift Shop. He need a typography focused logo. (please comment on my work, thank you !)
This looks good though, especially for the way you designed the word, "GIFT". Though just my suggestion, the words on the side feel a bit bland for a logo and would have been better for "Pat's" and "Shop" to be above and below the gift word respectively. Otherwise it looks pretty good
2 weeks ago by Rodney - Reply
Creative design. I like how you made the “GIFT” logo well. The color given also blends well.
2 weeks ago by Dhea Novianti R - Reply