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Jayne Attwood
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I like the font but the brief wanted a handwritten name. Otherwise, I love the look and design. It might work for another client
1 year ago by Jayne Attwood
I love the colour palette and the font. I really like the ideas you are trying to convey with the skyline and the Union Jack. Have you tried dividing the page and having the skyline on the bottom and Union Jack on the top?
1 year ago by Jayne Attwood
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Jayne Attwood • 1 year ago
I’m experimenting with size and text placement. Any feedback is appreciated.
I really like the overall playful and friendly atmosphere the poster projects. I'm wondering if you could think about hierarchy a bit? As in: which of the different text elements draws the reader in? And which one are they going to find by themselves, because they are looking for it?
1 year ago by Jo - Reply
Hello, This is really good, but I would advise you to make the text in the top left corner a little bit smaller and a couple of the graphics could be smaller as well. Also, make sure you leave enough negative space so the poster does not look crowded. Good Job! Have A Nice Day!
1 year ago by Anthony - Reply