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Great start!! i would love to she the floral pattern take up less space and the name "Jennifer's Heaven" take up more space on both the front and back of the card.-Happy Designing
5 months ago by Daryl
This is really good. I love the two pillows on the bed. I would like the see the crescent of the moon take up alil more negative space inside of the "O". It feels alil small to me. -Happy Designing
5 months ago by Daryl
Really good mock ups. I would love to see it sit on just a white back ground so i can see the colors pop.
5 months ago by Daryl
Great start! I think you could push the grunge, collage, magazine cutout look alil further. Maybe applying that style/look to the edges of the main image in the back or to the boarders of the flyer itself. its seems to fall off and look unfinished as we move towards the bottom of the design. You could had more elements to help frame the design better. Also bumping up some of the text on the design in addition to maybe emphasizing the "75%" to help make it pop. - Happy Designing
5 months ago by Daryl
Great start! In addition to adjusting some of the spacing of some of the elements on the page, you could also maybe think about adjusting some of the contrast of the images. A lot of it blends into together and starts to get a little muted. You can adjust some of saturation of orange to really get things to pop. That will help the item in the orange areas to pop showcasing all the awesome products they have on sale. Also adjusting the image of the woman with the bags can help really bring forth all the stuff they got on sale. Making her orange shirt pop could really draw attention to it almost like its on of the things she bought on sale as well.-Happy Designing
5 months ago by Daryl
Nice start! I think maybe adding some sort of human element to the design would help this connect to workers of TimTim. Using maybe a stock photo of retail employees instead of the imagery you have currently could help make the intake form more inviting. Also maybe adding more of their secondary accent orange color could help as well. - happy Designing
5 months ago by Daryl
Good start. You could be better off placing the text for DTB shipping around the ship icon. Doing this can help you understand the icon in the back clearer. My by placing "shipping solutions" in the waves under the ship and placing "DTB" about the ship you want have the word mark and the design clash so much- Happy Designing
5 months ago by Daryl
This is a good start! Your design is very bottom heavy. There is a lot of empty space that could be utilized above the strong man's arms. You could fill in that space with with some of the information you have at the bottom. This could help give the text on the page some breathing room-Happy designing
5 months ago by Daryl
Being that this is a Business card that are typical small, i feel like the font sizing should be bumped up and made much bigger. You have some space to play with. Happy Designing!
2 years ago by Daryl
I would like to see how it would look if "Diner" was wrapped alone the bottom of the plate. Solid design. Happy Designing!
2 years ago by Daryl
Pretty cool, Don't be afraid to take up more space with the elements that matter! The Hashtag and the "100% Natural" could be alil big to help information stand out a little more from the background. Also i like the monochromatic approach but maybe a splash of color on some of the text/elements of the foreground design would help make the info pop from the background as well. Happy Designing!
2 years ago by Daryl
Zoom out of your image and make it really small. Can you still read the font? Better yet, Can you make out what the logo is suppose to represent? prehaps making the text in the middle (Wine Time) a little thicker so its easier to read. Happy Designing!
2 years ago by Daryl
It's very abstract! Prehaps adding an abstract depiction of water or a wave would help this read better. Maybe the symbol could be some sort of depiction of a cleaning tool. I am not sure what your logo is about. It looks like a water drop, If so, thats a great place to start off. Unfortunately the prompt is very vague and doesnt give you enough direction to hone in on. But that being said, it does leave you open to a bunch of possibilties on a creative specturm. You can be abstract and creative but try to keep it in the theme of the bussiness. Happy Designing!
2 years ago by Daryl
Fonts could be your friend here! Taking a crack at trying to pull an authentic calligraphy look by hand is admirable but hard work that takes a lot of practice! Luckily there are tons of fonts out there that definitely would help. Try picking a script font or a font that has the calligraphy look and edit the width and spacing of the letter, strokes and spacing to get a nice desired affect. Happy Designing!
2 years ago by Daryl
This is very simple and cool. Probably adding some negative space between the box and the "C" of the cube could help push this design alil further. Also playing around with the font size with the "MUIC" would help break up the design and make it even more interesting. Happy Designing!
2 years ago by Daryl
The second logo is probably the strongest one. You would need to just clean up some of the lines on top of the "DTP" logo. You can also try out a different sans font for the "Shipping Solutions" Happy Designing!!
2 years ago by Daryl
The design technique is really solid here. Even your choice of font for the lettering and the "G" having an arrow. Really cool. If i really had to complain it would be that the actual icon doesn't read the full "DTP" to me. I get a solid "D" at most and maybe a "P" but that "T" gets lost. Maybe playing with the T's handle abit to make it stand out more, or maybe dont cut the "T" wing from the "D". I am not sure. Happy Designing!
2 years ago by Daryl
This is a good start! A lot of pictorial logo marks have strong silhouettes. Something to think about when tackling a stand alone logo icon; how would this logo icon look solid black or in black is white? Could i recognize this company from just the silhouette alone.
I am assuming its a pizza slice on a plate? or maybe a box? playing around and adding more negative space between the grey area and the pizza slice might help your design. Also playing around with the proportion of the pizza slice relative to grey rectangle might help separate the two shapes to make this read better. Maybe dropping the box in the back entirely and adding something relating to San Diego. Happy Designing!
2 years ago by Daryl
Cool design! its simple and i love the "c" in relation to the money. My only critic would be maybe adding some some sort of white space or negative space where the bottom of the "C" meets the "S". As of now the area just seems unfinished. I get that the "C" is supposed to flow into the "S" but the letters get alil lost. I think adding some sort of break but still keeping the curve and flow would really help the letter stand out as-well help make the silhouette of the logo more interesting. Maybe some sort of negative space where the line meets the C as well . Happy Designing!!
2 years ago by Daryl
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Daryl • 2 years ago
Hey!
I am Eilene, founder of yoc.com. For a while now, I've been looking for a good designer for my steel production company. I would like a simple flyer for an event. We primarily use the color green (#3ba521). Can you help us out?
I am Eilene, founder of yoc.com. For a while now, I've been looking for a good designer for my steel production company. I would like a simple flyer for an event. We primarily use the color green (#3ba521). Can you help us out?
This is really nice! Perfectly fits the description
2 years ago by Victor - Reply
I like this design concept, I feel like the text could be replaced with informational dummy text
2 years ago by Choice Pro Media - Reply