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Lindsay
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I like the typeface, it's bold but not overpowering. I noticed the spacing between Safe, Haven and Shelter is a little off. Also, the quote is way too close to the dog's head, and also too close to "Almost full!" in the newspaper ad. Also in the newspaper ad, the tracking is much too tight. Just my 2 cents.
1 year ago by Lindsay
I like the creativity of this one, but I'm not sure what letter the pillow and bed are trying to make.
1 year ago by Lindsay
This looks great! Simple. I like the blue background, but it feels casual to me, not so much luxurious. Also, I think you could leave out the slanted like and just have the info there. For a first time, you've done well!
1 year ago by Lindsay
The two flowers in the corners are distracting. I might use one of those flowers instead of the vase of flowers. Also, maybe put "floristry" up by "Jennifer's Heaven" since they wanted it to be clear that they are a floristry. The colors are nice, the watercolor effect is pretty. I don't think it feels upscale to me though, this feels more like a neighborhood florist.
2 years ago by Lindsay
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Jennifer's Heaven Floristry
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Lindsay • 2 years ago
Jennifer's Heavengraphic
The client asked for an upscale card for their floristry. Accented with rose gold, this card fits the request. Let me know what you think!
Wow looks so premium! Love the free flowing mark on the backside :)
2 years ago by Priyanka Salelkar - Reply