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I really like the font selection and color combination. Great work with the icons!"
4 weeks ago by Md Sahjamal

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Logo Design for Children's Book Illustrator - Michelle Gobeil

Md Sahjamal • 4 weeks ago
Designed a hand-drawn style logo for a children's book illustrator featuring playful book and pencil illustrations with kids reading. I'd love to get your thoughts and feedback on the layout and typography!
Md Sahjamal • 4 weeks ago
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I think this is a great start, each element you chose fits this purpose very well. However I think it needs to be more cohesive. The children seem to be in a different style and colour than the books and pencils, so I would recommend making them all the same style and colour palette. I also think having two pencils at that length is a bit distracting and draws the eye too far away, I would recommend keeping one pencil and shortening it to let each element be viewed together more easily. Overall it's a wonderful idea, just refine it to be more cohesive and I think it will be a gorgeous logo.
3 weeks ago by Jesse - Reply
It looks playful indeed! if you change the colors of the kids on the page it will make it look more cohesive, try to align them w each other and shorten the pencils to make the logo be more put together and intentional. love the idea though!
3 weeks ago by Max - Reply
I suggest choosing one main graphic element and removing the gold stroke. This could create a cleaner, more custom hand-drawn feel.
3 weeks ago by ZKDesigns - Reply