Hello! I feel like for an illustration, it lacks story or definite meaning as to what it is. If I were to see this illustration by itself without the prompt, I probably would have not understood it.
That being said, there are too many elements present, and presents a sensory overload to the viewer.
Actually this one is my 1st graphic design as illustration.. My basic thought was to create a design comparing the two... And mistakenly I posted it in logo section