I like the concept of the interlacing of the ice cream, however, it comes off a bit messy. I think it would help a little bit if the ice-cream scoops were completely round.
In terms of color I think the colors can work, but maybe de-saturate them a little and make them lighter as well. I think the cone would be more appealing if it was white with black markings (instead of black with green marking). I hope you continue working on this design, and I would love to see it after a few revisions