Hi Gabriella, I'm Havir.I'm the CEO and founder of Vasuki. We are a multimedia cum software company. So, as a guy who worked in the design industry for more than 2 years, I'm saying your feedback. First of all, the purpose of a visiting card is to let our customers know our contact information details. It is not a place to show our design talent. So, A business/visiting card must be very simple and minimal. If you want an example, just search for the images of Apple's visiting card on Google..Apple is one of the best and most recognized companies, but its visiting card is very simple and minimal. In your design, the main issue I saw is the font you used.These types of fonts are not used to convey the Main info about the design. So the fonts must be simple and minimal, for example. Frankin Gothic, Futura, etc..And the typography music school is already very huge in size, which makes the design unbalanced, so reduce its size. And the music notes from the saxophone have been cropped out from the top, which is not looking so good. Either you can delete it or make it small so that it won't get cropped.. And the musical note graphics behind the typography are not looking good, delete that to make the typography stand out I'm Sure you can do a lot better, Dear. With regards, Havir

It feels like a lot is going on with this design. I would suggest positioning Miami Music School across the top and placing the founder's name underneath. For the purple background circle, I would adjust the size so that half is coming out of the left or right side. For all of the contact information, I would change the fonts to be more legible.