didnt know how to post a updat on my original post so am making another one, here is a updated version of the logo for the brewery, they asked for it to be abstract, and I also based it off of Stainless Steel Vertical Brewery Tanks.
Well since i didn't read what the brief is, I think this logo is unique and simple. Personally i like it, but maybe you can change the yellow line/pole with bottle figure. That will be more abstract if you asked to be abstract.
In terms of design, the logo has an interesting concept with simple and symbolic shapes. Here are a few points for improvement:
Balance of Elements: The logo is quite symmetrical, but it can be made more dynamic by adjusting the proportions of elements like the icon and text so it doesn't look too crowded.
Legibility: The text "BREWERY INK" is clear, but if you narrow the logo, ensure the text remains easy to read at smaller sizes. You might consider slightly modifying the font to make it look more modern or playful, depending on the brand's character.
Color: The orange and yellow colors provide a cheerful and bright feel, which fits well with the brewery theme. However, adding contrast (such as a darker background) could make the logo stand out more.
Overall, the design is good and can be enhanced with a few adjustments to make it sharper and more professional. - Chatgpt